The Fifth Petal

Hello.  I hope everyone is having a good Monday.  I am reviewing Brunonia Barry's latest novel in The Lace Reader series today.  The first book in the series is The Lace Reader.  Another novel by this author is The Map of True Places.  You can follow Brunonia Barry on Amazon and receive updates on her latest novels.

The Fifth Petal by Brunonia Barry is the second book The Lace Reader series.  John Rafferty is the police chief for the town of Salem, Massachusetts.  It is Halloween which is a busy time in Salem and a big problem just landed in his lap.  Rose Wheelan has been arrested for the murder of Billy Barnes.  Billy along with his pals, James and Monk were tormenting Rose (Billy sliced her check with a knife).  Billy’s great-aunt, Helen Barnes wants justice.  Helen along with many others in Salem, feel Rose is a nuisance and a murderess.  They blame Rose for the murder of three women in 1989.  It is Salem’s famous cold case known as The Goddess Murders.  Twenty-five years ago, Rose was a respected scholar in the community. On November 1, 1989 Rose and a little girl were the only survivors of a brutal slaying on Proctor’s Ledge.  Rose has never been the same since then.  She now wanders the city talking to trees and looking for the original hanging tree.  John decides to start looking into the cold case and see if he can solve it.  He wants to prove Rose’s innocence.  Callie Cahill has been living in Northampton and working as a music therapist.  When she reads about Rose in the paper, she is shocked.  The nuns had told her that Rose was dead.  Callie is the other survivor of that fateful night.  Callie wants to help Rose, and she would love to finally get answers on what happened to her mother.  Callie’s mother, Olivia was one of the victims along with her two friends, Cheryl Cassella and Susan Symms.  It turns out that each person who was present that night was related to a “witch” executed  in 1692.  Callie, thanks to her visions, will be able to assist John with the investigation.  What were the women doing on Proctor’s Ledge that Halloween night?  Is the real killer a human, a witch, or something far more sinister?

The Fifth Petal sounds like a great paranormal mystery novel.  Unfortunately, I was very disappointed with the final product.  There is some nice writing and excellent research, but the novels pace is sluggish (actually, I think slugs move faster).  I was never drawn into the story (it did not engage me in any way).  The author did not stick with the main storyline.  There are a couple of side stories that were unnecessary.  The main one being Callie and her music therapy.  I ended up skipping through these sections.  Brunonia Barry is also a descriptive writer which leads to many unnecessary details.  I give The Fifth Petal 2 out of 5 stars (I did not like it).  I believe the book needs major editing.  The Fifth Petal could be a good book with a little work.  I wish the author had run with the supernatural elements (embraced it).  It would have made for a more entertaining story.  Many readers will be able to figure out the identity of the culprit.  Only a couple of clues are needed to work out this mystery (if you can manage to get that far into the book).  I was tempted many times to toss The Fifth Petal aside, but I did persevere to the end (which I discovered to be a letdown).  Of course, The Fifth Petal has the requisite romance which just slows down the narrative even more (Thanksgiving seemed to go on for days).  I found some information to be replicated especially about the 1989 murder (and I forget how many times we are told that John Rafferty is the chief of police).  While this is the second book in The Lace Reader series, it can be read alone.  The author updates the readers on what occurred in The Lace Reader.  The Fifth Petal releases on Tuesday, January 24.

I am going to go eat my dinner and then enjoy my shows. Supergirl returns from its winter break tonight.  Shadowhunters, Beyond, Lucifer, and Timeless are on tonight as well.  I am currently reading Because You're Mine by Colleen Coble (I just received a copy of it).  May you have an enjoyable night.  Take care and Happy Reading!

Kris
The Avid Reader