Stay Calm and Collie On: A Pet Palace Mystery

Greetings!  Are you ready for Thanksgiving?  I have everything purchased and ready to cook. We are an untraditional household.  Since none of us are fond of turkey, we are having fried chicken this year.  My mother has requested my apple cobbler for dessert.  Are you traditional or unconventional?  

Stay Calm and Collie On by Lane Stone is the first book in A Pet Palace Mystery series. Sue Patrick co-owns Buckingham Pet Palace with Lady Anthea Fitzwalter.  Sue has been busy getting everything ready for Lady Anthea’s visit including a Pet Parent Appreciation Gala (a doggy gala).  Soon after Lady Anthea arrives, Sue gets a call from the police stating the Buckingham Pet Palace van has been found abandoned at the Lewes Ferry Terminal.  Henry Cannon was driving the dogs home and only one made it to its destination.  Sue and Lady Anthea arrive and discovers Henry dead in the back of the van along with the dogs.  Business takes an immediate nosedive when rumors abound that the dogs were being smuggled out of the country.  Sue and Lady Anthea realize they need to sniff out the killer or their new business venture will be over before its begun.

Stay Calm and Collie On did not feel like a finished novel.  It seemed like a rough draft in need of polishing (and some rewriting). I thought the story had a decent pace, but I felt some key details are missing.  We are not given enough information on Sue Patrick.  Readers are given details on the business and how she came to be in contact with Lady Anthea.  I wanted to know more about Sue (I found out more about the gala than about Sue).  The story lacked focus.  It jumped around (reminded me of a dog twirling in circles chasing its tail).  Plus, did we need so many references to surfing and Elvis Presley.  The mystery is not complicated and the killer can be deduced early in the book.  The suspect list is extremely small.  I just wanted more substance and less fluff.  There are some cute scenes with dogs and humorous dialogue.  For readers who enjoy light, humorous cozy mysteries (with emphasis on cozy), then pick up a copy of Stay Calm and Collie On.

Thank you for stopping by today.  I am enjoying the Gilmore the Merrier marathon that started today on UP! TV.  I will be back tomorrow with my review of Mermaid Fins, Winds and Rolling Pins by Erin Johnson.  Have a delightful day, take care and Happy Reading!

Kris
The Avid Reader